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Hi All,
Well here is the next chapter. Toph has become a woman in the eyes of the Southern Water Tribe and maybe in Sokka’s as well.
The custom of women wearing their hair up was real for the Arctic peoples of Greenland. I read it in a book and couldn’t pass it up. The rest is made up by me. I hope I got a little close to the truth (I really am a fat old man and don’t know that much about the ‘Moon Cycle’)
This chapter was only about half as long as the last one, but I hope it was enjoyable.
Thank you all so much for sticking with my story.
Thanks to all the faves and the comments on the last chapter. They really mean a lot to me and keep me going.
Don't forget Kagey's fan art [link]
Thank you to all for reading
All comments and/or criticisms are more than welcome.
Previous here; [link]
Next; [link]
Hi All,
Well here is the next chapter. Toph has become a woman in the eyes of the Southern Water Tribe and maybe in Sokka’s as well.
The custom of women wearing their hair up was real for the Arctic peoples of Greenland. I read it in a book and couldn’t pass it up. The rest is made up by me. I hope I got a little close to the truth (I really am a fat old man and don’t know that much about the ‘Moon Cycle’)
This chapter was only about half as long as the last one, but I hope it was enjoyable.
Thank you all so much for sticking with my story.
Thanks to all the faves and the comments on the last chapter. They really mean a lot to me and keep me going.
Don't forget Kagey's fan art [link]
Thank you to all for reading
All comments and/or criticisms are more than welcome.
Previous here; [link]
Next; [link]
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I like the confusion of Toph's first menstruation- and Sokka's casual and clueless attitude about it is perfect! Very natural.